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SORRY (mikes story)

2/9/2016

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It all started when Jack moved into my neighbourhood. At first it was fun but now its not... One day Jack came outside with his friend Justin and a few others. I saw them at school once but no other times. Anyway I was checking my mail and after I got my mail I said ' Hi Jack' and I was going to go in when he said 'THINK FAST'. And then it happened. The water balloon hit me in the chest. All of them were laughing so I said 'That's not funny' with a red face and went into my house. When I got inside my mom asked why I was soaking and I said 'it was Jack'. Jack? she said surprised 'lets go talk to him' she said suddenly angry. 'NO MOM ITS OK IM FINE' I thundered. After that I stayed in my room for a little while. Jack and his friends were fine for a few days 
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Riley
2/9/2016 11:03:13 am

Nice job Laksh, very descriptive! I really liked it and maybe next time you could make it a bit longer.

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Cooper
2/9/2016 11:16:44 am

that was a fasinating story i liked how you used descriptive words in your story but it was a little confusing

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